Altered with all of your feedback in mind, Donald. I'm sure it's because my eyes were so used to the other version, but this one feels almost empty (in a good way, I think). So hard to let go of those orange lines..
I'm trying to think of other ways to improve it before moving on.
Looks good Christopher. Keep it that way. One thing I find awkward is the light area on the victim (light grey triangle with a little blood at bottom right). Also, let's brighten up the dark areas on the creature's cape/cloth (exterior).
ReplyDeleteMy idea for the bright spot was to show off both the translucent quality of the fabric as well as the arched posture of the victim. I'll see what it looks like without it, however. I'll also brighten up the ghost's cape.
DeleteThank you for the feedback.