That looks good Noah. Please try a version with a much smaller sun (this will open up the whole space and make it more realistic). Also, notice how if we imagine the whole shape of the sun right now it is almost identical to the shape of the tail at left... I would also accentuate a bit the red from the beast's mouth. Epic scene!
Great! Let's try something: darken the small wave (between boat and mouth) to give the impression that it is inside the mouth. Also, revisit the shadow of the boat on the waves, it looks like the shadow goes straight through the waves and doesn't follow the surface of the water.
That looks good Noah. Please try a version with a much smaller sun (this will open up the whole space and make it more realistic). Also, notice how if we imagine the whole shape of the sun right now it is almost identical to the shape of the tail at left... I would also accentuate a bit the red from the beast's mouth. Epic scene!
ReplyDeleteGreat! Let's try something: darken the small wave (between boat and mouth) to give the impression that it is inside the mouth. Also, revisit the shadow of the boat on the waves, it looks like the shadow goes straight through the waves and doesn't follow the surface of the water.
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