Saturday, 10 March 2018

progress update for feedback


Hey Donald,I'm posting a update for more feedback please. I made the perimeter of the planet larger as you suggested and made the crater a little smaller. I've gone ahead with an expression that I liked and started rendering. Let me know what else needs adjusting/improving,
Thank you.  


1 comment:

  1. Looking good Kris. We have moved down a few miles closer to the planet and that's good. Get ride of the upper left planet. Get ride of those scribbled lines in space (at top of image). Reduce considerably the effect of the spaceship reactor. A few stars are a bit big also. As for your character posing, I guess it could work as your image clearly has a cheesy vibe. However, since the lighting on your character at this stage is still approximate you could take the upper body (from waist up) and slightly tilt it to the right. This will make your character in a less straight up position, it will suggest more struggling and accentuate her position towards the spaceship. I would certainly try to have her head turned a bit more to the spaceship again for dramatic purpose. This is going well. Nice work.

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