Looking good Peter. I would go for the character in image #1. Unfold his left forearm so that the sword doesn't connect with the long black shape nearby. I would also try to add a similar black shape on the other side as well. Make his left arm's sleeve bigger, it is way smaller than the right arm. Strong reflections on trees are still a bit high. There is a lot of tree branches only on the trees near the ghost which make the ghost's details a bit lost in the whole picture. Add tree branches to all trees and gradually make the smaller as you get closer to the ghost. Move away the tree next to the ghost(on the left) as it is too close and also too thick. It would be interesting to see a bit more contrast overall, the fact that the top parts of the trees have almost pure blacks make them pop out from the bottom/deep woods which seems to be depicted as dark grey. This is going to be very nice. Hope I'll see you tonight.
Looking good Peter. I would go for the character in image #1. Unfold his left forearm so that the sword doesn't connect with the long black shape nearby. I would also try to add a similar black shape on the other side as well. Make his left arm's sleeve bigger, it is way smaller than the right arm. Strong reflections on trees are still a bit high. There is a lot of tree branches only on the trees near the ghost which make the ghost's details a bit lost in the whole picture. Add tree branches to all trees and gradually make the smaller as you get closer to the ghost. Move away the tree next to the ghost(on the left) as it is too close and also too thick. It would be interesting to see a bit more contrast overall, the fact that the top parts of the trees have almost pure blacks make them pop out from the bottom/deep woods which seems to be depicted as dark grey. This is going to be very nice. Hope I'll see you tonight.
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