Excellent work BrimRun. I just noticed the thickness of the sides of the boat, specially the one in foreground starting near the right foot of man with harpoon and going to the left hand of man at back of the boat. That grey part is very thick and a bit to light. Also, orange is a bit too strong on each sides of tail (center-right). I also feel that the dark cloud over man with harpoon is too well defined and attracts the eye a lot. Great image, you're almost there.
Excellent work BrimRun. I just noticed the thickness of the sides of the boat, specially the one in foreground starting near the right foot of man with harpoon and going to the left hand of man at back of the boat. That grey part is very thick and a bit to light. Also, orange is a bit too strong on each sides of tail (center-right). I also feel that the dark cloud over man with harpoon is too well defined and attracts the eye a lot. Great image, you're almost there.
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