Nice work Michael. Try to re-shape the top of the monster's head so that it clearly covers up the left bottom frame of window (Right now it seems that the frame is crushing the head). Also maybe add a stronger lighting hitting the top and right side of monster. Last thing: The lines defining the rim of the bowl are not perfect, they are a bit sketchy and have and organic feel to them, just like the stuff inside the bowl...we need to feel a difference. Try to render the rim of bowl just like you did with the window frame. Don't hesitate to use the oval shape in photoshop to get a nice slick rim.
Awesome! One final thing I would push a bit more is to stretch that guy's arm (the one who's throwing) over his head and make sure the arm points toward the piece of cereal. Bravo!
Nice work Michael. Try to re-shape the top of the monster's head so that it clearly covers up the left bottom frame of window (Right now it seems that the frame is crushing the head). Also maybe add a stronger lighting hitting the top and right side of monster. Last thing: The lines defining the rim of the bowl are not perfect, they are a bit sketchy and have and organic feel to them, just like the stuff inside the bowl...we need to feel a difference. Try to render the rim of bowl just like you did with the window frame. Don't hesitate to use the oval shape in photoshop to get a nice slick rim.
ReplyDeletewill do Donald Thanks!
ReplyDeleteAwesome! One final thing I would push a bit more is to stretch that guy's arm (the one who's throwing) over his head and make sure the arm points toward the piece of cereal. Bravo!
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