Sunday, 18 March 2018

updated composition

Hey Donald, here is a revised version with the changes you suggested last week. Let me know your thoughts please.


1 comment:

  1. Looking good Kris. So the lighting you did is a bit more from the side than the front like we discussed. With the time we have left I think we're going to work around that, although the reactor's light on the character might mingle with that light source... But first, let's try to make the tentacle that is around the legs more credible (it is a bit awkward how the tip pops out), get some clay and wrap it around some figurine's legs or sticks that could work as legs and use that as a reference. Try to make the fourth tentacle (from left to right) more dynamic, maybe it goes behind her back and comes out over her right shoulder/top of head. You can make one or a few quick versions and post back. The more I look at it the more that planet at the top seems unnecessary...make a test and remove it and put a downsized version of the spaceship instead.

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