This looks good Tarik. Take a moment to revisit the candles area, specifically the shadows projected by them on the table. Bring the candles closer to your subject sitting at the table (this will accentuate the ''In Her Thoughts'' moment). It will also separate the candles from the frame behind. I also think it would be interesting to feel some kind of wall behind the whole scene and considerate how the Ghost Hand's light would affect those tiny portions of wall on each sides of the image (this is the time to ask yourself about the distance between the woman and the framed painting behind). Very interesting image.
This looks good Tarik. Take a moment to revisit the candles area, specifically the shadows projected by them on the table. Bring the candles closer to your subject sitting at the table (this will accentuate the ''In Her Thoughts'' moment). It will also separate the candles from the frame behind. I also think it would be interesting to feel some kind of wall behind the whole scene and considerate how the Ghost Hand's light would affect those tiny portions of wall on each sides of the image (this is the time to ask yourself about the distance between the woman and the framed painting behind). Very interesting image.
ReplyDeleteThank you very much for your feedback, I'll definitely apply the changes. Looking forward for class on thursday.
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